Which really means, now I have to go back and basically rework all the things that I got wrong...Usually, only about 98% of a first draft is crap needing polish or jettisoning.
Below is the usual posting of some high-quality wordsmithing.
Below the below, random sketches!
From today --
Tasha tipped her head back. For the second time that day, Leonard's green pointed hat slid off her head. Eyes closed, her mom's hands holding her arms tight, Tasha rocked back on her heel like everything below her chin was a flesh-clad noodle.
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